December mock exam: Learner Response blog tasks
1) Type up any feedback on your paper (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential). If you only have marks and a grade on the paper, write a WWW/EBI yourself based on your scores.
mark: 53 = grade 6
WWW- A strong exam with the potential to go higher! Well done! Engagement with media debates in section B is particularly good
EBI- The 20-mark essay on television is holding you back here. Examples from both CSPs are crucial here along side a clear and coherent argument.
- all sounds generated within the world of the drama
-any example of dialogue from the extract such as ‘When Lyra says, “So you’re a kitchen boy then?”
3) Next, identify three points you could have made in Q1.3 - camerawork and the extract. Look for the indicative content in the mark scheme - these are the suggested answers from AQA.
• Will’s suggestion that they work together is made while Lyra is shown in a medium close-up over-the-shoulder shot. This allows the audience to see her reaction – a slight smile
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